Lovan,+Elijah+D.

This is a picture of me and my old man. I'm sure you couldn't deduce that, but I felt like sharing that useless bit of information with you. We were deep sea fishing, catching EVERYTHING. The captain said he's never seen anything like it. Women and children cried at the beautiful sight that was my family catching fish. We were featured in the local newspaper, before the government asked all evidence of the incident be erased.


 * INTERESTING STORY*.. Not really, but I'm sure that got your attention. Anyway, here's my shot at giving you a cool little piece of information about me. When I was twelve, I was shot in the head. Now this was no ordinary gun.. It was a pellet gun. This incident was legit. My cousin and I had just finished bird hunting on a hot, muggy summer day (those are the best, right?). We decided to relax on my porch and drink a couple cokes and talk about all the things we didn't kill, when I thought it would be a great idea to jokingly shoot a blast of air at my cousin. Now my rifle was a one pump chump, meaning it would only take one click to be ready to go, and it was easy to tell if it was unloaded. My cousin jumped after the prank, and decided to return the favor.. just with a little twist. He pointed the gun at my head and said "Hey, Eli!! Look at this!".. I remember looking at the barrel and hearing a shot, then feeling a gush of warmth pour over my head. It took a little bit, but I soon realized I had been shot. I spent a night in Children's, where they tried to retrieve the lost piece of ammunition, but to no avail. Long story short.. I was shot in the head and the pellet ended up embedded deep in my temple, where it still resides to this day.

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